Tuesday, November 13, 2012

THE UNEXPECTED POKER MATCH


It was a rainy and cold day, it was dark and there is nobody in the street of Moscow. Ronaldinho has cold so he entered in a bar. But it wasn’t a normal bar, there were a Russian mafia and they play at poker betting a lot of money. Ronaldinho drank a beer and he sit in the table that were playing and he with other more start to playing with the Russian mafia. He has a lot of money so he doesn’t matter if he won or lost.

When he started playing, he realize that he had forgotten the money at home and that he had only 20 pounds on the pocket, so he decided to act a bit. They won the first game fortunately so they could continue playing without having any risk. On the second game they started losing, Ronaldinho looked to his opponent and he said:

- I’m not worry, I have a lot of money, if I lose money now I will win later because I have never lost playing poker! And he started laughing.

But he started to lose because the luck change a lot, so he put very nervous because he didn’t have any money and he was playing with very dangerous people because they used guns and they killed people. He didn’t have money so he had to escape, he thought that he had to do something, he said that he went to the toilet and he escaped. The Russian mafia hadn't believed him so they chased and when the saw that he was escaping the chased him with the car.

Ronaldinho went very fast with her car and he know that Russian mafia didn't have problems to killed him. He was very nervous and mafious people was getting near to her car and Ronaldinho had an idea. He left her car and he started running very fast to an house, but the mafia was coming at the back of Ronaldinho also running. So Ronaldinho entered to a home.

He locked the door and he switched on the light. The mafia knocked at the door but Ronaldinho didn’t open, so the mafia started banging the door. Ronaldinho put a wardrobe in front of the door but it didn’t work. The mafia throw the door and the wardrobe to the floor and they entered in the house. Ronaldinho hided in the bathroom very silence and closed the bolt slowly. Then the mafia started throwing everything and looking all the rooms. In the bedroom of Ronaldinho was the money and when the mafia found, they took it. Ronaldinho stayed silence but the Mafia realize that the door of the bedroom was closed.

When the mafia opened the door they start looking all the room but they didn’t found nothing so Ronaldinho calm down but when the mafia was going out he puff and the king of the mafia heard and went running to the room and looked behind the bed and it was there so he took him and he said very clear that in this life you couldn’t play with mafias, you couldn’t escape from mafias so he took her gun and he killed him.

THE END


Good morning, in this week we did some adventures, detectives and mysterious stories. This story is mine but I only write the first paragraph, they continued the storie the other members of the group and I continued also the stories of the others. Here I going to put the links to read the stories I continued, they are very good stories!!

-B1 Iker Azpiazu
-B2 Joannes Garikano
-B3 My story
-B4 Manex Izagirre
-B5 Joseba Olaetxea 
-B6 Imanol Arruebarrena

1 comment:

  1. Please, most of your verbs,and many of your subjects, possessives...are wrong!!!!!!

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